Poetry Friday: Haiku Sonnet

Last Tuesday, we watched “Mary Oliver: Saved By the Beauty of the World,” an American Masters program on PBS. For the first time ever, I watched TV with my notebook open in front of me, taking notes. It was touching to see so many pictures of her young, wide open face. And the lineup of celebrities who helped pay tribute! Stephen Colbert, Ada Limón, Oprah, Jason Reynolds…wow.

Looking back on my notes, I realized that the were enough turns (or segments) in Mary Oliver’s life for a haiku sonnet: four 5-7-5 haiku ending with one 5 or 7 syllable couplet. And so a new form is born: the biographical haiku sonnet! My poem goes from childhood, to teen years, to adulthood. Next comes the death of her beloved, Molly Malone Cook, and Mary Oliver gets the last word with a line from her poem, “Wild Geese.”

The Poetry Sisters’ challenge this month was to write haiku sonnets. As usual, I’m not sure which of the Poetry Sisters are in this month, but here they all are, just in case:

Laura @ Laura Purdie Salas
Liz @ Liz Garton Scanlon
Sara @ Read Write Believe
Tanita @ {fiction, instead of lies}
Tricia @ The Miss Rumphius Effect 

Mona has the Poetry Friday roundup this week at Mona Voelkel.

More about Mary Oliver and the PBS special via Letters to Dead Authors & Artists on Substack, Letter #46: To Mary Oliver.

10 thoughts on “Poetry Friday: Haiku Sonnet”

  1. Mary Lee, what a beautiful poem and tribute to Mary Oliver! That movie inspired me greatly, as does your biographical haiku sonnet. I especially love “people die, but never love.” Thank you for this poem and a new form to ponder!!!

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  2. Mary Lee, I just watched the documentary. I did not have a notebook with me but oh, what a wonderful idea because it was just so full of quotes and remembrances and nuggets worth jotting down. This haiku is a lovely, no brilliant capture of MO’s life as portrayed by the documentary. I never knew about her beloved Molly…but I felt the loss of her for Mary. What an amazing way Mary responded to life and death and loss. I feel lucky to have also lived in her time…especially that part of “and meanwhile the world goes on.” Sigh. Thank goodness for Mary Oliver and her confidence in herself as poet.

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  3. Mary Lee, you are so creative with your use of this form. A perfect ending for such a concise, yet full, biography.

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  4. It encompasses her life so filled, Mary Lee, with things we still love. She taught us well! I didn’t know about the documentary, so will look for it!

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  5. What a lovely idea, Mary Lee. Wouldn’t teachers have a blast with this? I adore that “ending became beginning” and that you ended with her line. Thanks for the documentary link, too! Putting it on my list.

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  6. I don’t think I quite got the sonnets as separate entities as well as you did – these are lovely. Especially appreciate how ending became beginning is thematic throughout the poem – introducing that as a thought early on weaves perfectly into the ‘inevitably’ and the ‘meanwhile the world goes on.’ Love that.

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  7. Oh, hello!! This is overachieving at its best!! Her whole bio, captured perfectly. She deserves a haiku sonnet — it’s just right for her!

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  8. I haven’t watched the documentary yet, but I will. And I’ll have my notebook with me. I love how you captured her life in haiku segments. What a great new form!

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