Poetry Friday: Ripples

In the dry garden
we contemplate raked ripples
around the rock.

In the pond
turtle raises her head.
Look! More ripples!


©Mary Lee Hahn, 2023

Last month, we went to the Japanese Festival at Dawes Arboretum east of Columbus. Their Japanese gardens are fabulous. I learned the difference between the dry garden shown above, and the wet garden. (Which really did have a turtle popping up its head!) I was honored when Margaret used this picture for This Photo Wants to Be a Poem.

Molly has this week’s Poetry Friday Roundup at Nix the Comfort Zone.

Edited to add my Sealey reading for this past week: SINCE THE BABY CAME by Kathleen Long Bostrom, MY HEAD HAS A BELLY ACHE by Chris Harris, BLACK GIRL, CALL HOME by Jasmine Mans, TREE WHISPERS by Mandy Ross, BUGS by Shirley Raines, and two days with SOME GLAD MORNING by Barbara Crooker.

17 thoughts on “Poetry Friday: Ripples”

  1. Beautiful photo and response, Mary Lee. I took Ingrid to our favorite art supply store this week. She wanted to get some school supplies & we found a few other wonders, like a zen garden for a desk (she has a new desk!) & we talked about calming down when ‘things’ feel a little overwhelming. She’s starting high school! I am tickled with verse two. Self-awareness is always tricky. Happy weekend!

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  2. I loved your photo and your poem–all those fabulous “r” sounds! I had to zoom in to make sure there wasn’t actually a turtle in the middle of all that raked sand. I’ve thought a lot about ripples this summer and enjoyed taking on the turtle’s perspective for a change. How lucky are you to have Japanese gardens near you!?!

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  3. I love the (yes, zen) playfulness of these two stanzas, Mary Lee! I really did want to look at the turtle’s head.It’s fun to go places and do things, isn’t it? What I want to know is how the raker gets out of the dry pond without leaving footsteps…

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